Comments on: “Surprised by Joy–Impatient as the Wind” http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/surprised-by-joy-impatient-as-the-wind/ Tue, 09 Nov 2010 05:40:27 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.5.2 By: catherine http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/surprised-by-joy-impatient-as-the-wind/#comment-185 catherine Thu, 15 Jan 2009 13:24:01 +0000 http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/?p=291#comment-185 (much happier commentpoem)

Dearest heart, know
this heart is still and bursting with love
Gods will did it.

Wherever he leads thee
matters not
for they are the same
you see.

For thy sacred sake
may my love be silent
a perfect guest in a perfect nest
giving joy
the chance to dance and sing a little sweeter
in thy breast.

]]> By: catherine http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/surprised-by-joy-impatient-as-the-wind/#comment-184 catherine Thu, 11 Dec 2008 13:29:30 +0000 http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/?p=291#comment-184 dear newly appointed editor, could you do me a favour and ammend the comment/ poem i sbmitted yesterday. I pressed a button prematurely, before i dotted the proverbial
i’s etc. The changes to be made are
1. full stop after ‘it’ – 3rd line.
2. capital letterstart of 4th line.
3. change ‘you’ to ‘thee’ -7th line
4. line 13 please add to line 12 to make one long line
- the chance to dance and sing a little louder-
thankyou thankyou
catherine

]]> By: catherine http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/surprised-by-joy-impatient-as-the-wind/#comment-183 catherine Wed, 10 Dec 2008 14:13:17 +0000 http://www.shortpoems.org/poem/?p=291#comment-183 Dearest heart, know
this heart is still and bursting with love
Gods will did it
wherever he leads you
matters not
as they are the same to me
for the sake of you
may my love be silent
a perfect guest
in a perfect nest
Giving Joy
the chance to dance
and sing a little louder
in thy breast.

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